Tuesday, 30 August 2011

the world without you

hollow
aching
scrambled
spinning
unforgiving

from inside
darkness
overflow
boiling

unthreading

i think i will garbage the you you have become
because my caring gets laughed at by the growling void you have erected all around




7 comments:

  1. Do you miss him/her or the he/she he/she has become? Don't mind me. Just joking ;-). I like the way you write and play with the words :-). Greetings from "el soleado sureste español" :-)

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  2. ironically, i miss the he that he never actually was... as it turns out :)

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  3. I like your comment/reply :-). You really know how to get nice memories ;-).

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  4. interesting what you say about me getting nice memories...memories have a power over me and i get ill with fascination from some of the memories :P
    i try to remember that "it does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live"; i am looking for this "to live" in small moments and i think that when i write words like these here, i am in fact trying to merge the world in my head with the world around me

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  5. It's curious that I have a similar feeling when I write or when I dive into my memories. Furthermore, just in the time we have lived some of our most nice and intensive moments, we do not have time enough to discover what those experiences can bring us both emotionally and rationally. Feeling and thinking about those experiences after a time can be a really nice and fruitful new experience that will help us to get new and even more interesting and intensive moments in the future real life :-) Ful

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  6. Indeed, the mind is an endless garden to explore. Here is a small, funny meditation on a related idea: http://mimiandeunice.com/2011/08/08/time-travel/ ;) (oh! I am sorry but the problem with your anonymous status seems to be part of the blogger experience; i found countless reports on the internet of this issue and it appears that many people could only solve it by moving their blogs to WordPress; however, unless it seriously bothers you, I am not just yet inclined to move - due to my laziness, I suspect)

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  7. :-D I also like Mimi and Eunice, they make me think and lough ;-). And I don't mind to go on being anonymous, as you perfectly know who and where I am ;-).

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